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Tuesday, December 10, 2019
Devan Cilliers 1 on Biteable.
Biteable for my learning journey. that I bib a about lorde and we had to write five facts about lorde it was really hard to find facts about lorde.
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Hi devan its Logan here this and outstanding peice of your own writing i never new who lorde was and i got lots of intresting stuff about lorde next time you could work on is to make the biteball a bit slower because i could'nt read it my own phase but still awesome job.
ReplyDeleteHello devan, i loved it!, never knew this about Lord Thank you! But i just couldn't read it maybe slow it down, But still great Peice of work!
ReplyDeleteHi Devan it is Malakai here. This is a very good biteable. Did you know I did a slide on lorde. Devan mabye you should slow it down a little bit but good job
ReplyDeletelorde .N\ever herd of it sounds good .and singer royle i will go and watch it ok by
ReplyDeleteHi Devan it is Zac here. This is a very good bite-able. Did you know I did a slide on Lorde. Devin maybe you should slow it down a little bit but good job
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