Hi my name is Devan this my report writing that I bib at school I struggle a lot at the being when I wach the videos it start to get easier it still working progress. give some feedback.
Friday, May 22, 2020
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Hi Devan its Logan here you have done good work here but maybe next time you should read what you are writing because some of it did not make sence
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ReplyDeleteHi Devan, I really liked watching the videos of the gorillas. This reminded me of when I did a report on gorillas last year. Next time you could look at your sentences and make sure they make sense.
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