Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 1, 2020
Judy blume
Hi my name is Devan this was my task to do the book was quiet interesting
and really funny you shoud made try reading book. we had to find some formation
about Judy blume http://www.judyblume.com/about/questions/personal.php. give
some feedback.
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Hi Devin
ReplyDeleteYou have included some interesting information on Judy Blume. I have learnt a few things. It's interesting how sometimes you think you want to do something and then you end up doing something completely different. What do you want to do when you are older?
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Hi Devan, fabulous work learning a bit about the character Judy Blume. I like the way you have presented some answers in an interview style.
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